Open Poetry #25 |
Music of the Heart |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
You lay your head On my chest And you listen To my heart As it plays its own music You smile as You hear my heart Beating My heart beats Faster As you start To make love to me After a few minutes You lay your head On my chest Again And my heart is playing A different tune A tune of my love Growing For you Music of my Heart Cold hands means a warm heart [This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (03-08-2003 06:59 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful tunes of love! Sweet and passionate all in one. Love, Margherita |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Intimate moments, your memory will forever keep. thanks for sharing julie. xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I know the feelings you describe here Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Very well done. Very descriptive. [This message has been edited by Ringo (03-08-2003 09:27 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
singing along... |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
another good write and very appropriately titled |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
Oh, great piece! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
the_loner_23 A lovely write and read. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
warm and sweet and a peek in your heart, nice words of yours |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Beautiful writing Sperari |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
....there's no better music in the world *sigh* :-) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Julie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, music does come from the heart and when there is love, there is a sound that no one could ever describe! (kiss on cheek) May this symphony always rock and roll in your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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