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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I am in place i find me breathing in my life sea strokes over purple horizons smoulering beneath the cliff where i forgot to look you are effortlessly placed tricks played you are mine at last i've known you miracle you grace me repeatedly in awe i will always be home within your presence beside me sleeping soft in you i am soul you are guide. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nice -- very nice, particularly the way you focused the imagery to an ending that was both surprising and inevitable... ....and the person who receives this? A happy camper to be sure! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
For me and Liam: Liam is soul and I am guide. I really loved this piece Gemma. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sighs.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... sleeping soft in you ... Touching oneness. Beautiful. Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmyes... it fits. made me think of a lovely man I know.  so? thank you...  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ratleader..Thankyou so much. i had no idea how it was going to end, just typed the thoughts as they came to me. inspired by amixture of a dream i recently had, and the way i feel about a certain someones meaning in my life. happy camper, lol i hope so. julie, so glad u can share these emotions. thanks 4 the reply lady. raph..makes me sigh too. thanks 4 the reply friend. margherita, yes oneness is the word indeed. thankyou so much. karen, glad it fits gal. thank you too. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. [This message has been edited by gemjop (03-08-2003 07:15 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely gemma! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
is pure silk gem - excellent xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Gemma, I loved it! I really did. the Wind is invisible. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - you must be as warm as this writing... BC |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
once again, I find myself in awe of another writer... If only I had the words. This should be in the book. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good...peaceful |
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