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ShaolinsOnlyPoet Junior Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 31Brooklyn, New York |
He got me strung out-- my feeling rung out-- I just can't seem to figure why I just can't shake this guy All up in my head All up in my bed Riding' shotgun in my life but wont commit to man and wife I know the choice is mine and so I seek to find the strength to cut this madness loose I can't recall when I reduced my standards quite this low, can't seem to let him go So I continue day to day in the same destructive way to let the nonsense fly to just ignore the lie I scratch my head and try to figure how I let this trifling little boy get me so strung out!! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This reminds me a lot of my sister and her boyfriend of 3 years...not a pretty thing to watch I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Poet - know where you are coming from - gotta just do it - nice write xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yea...I know this well |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Everyone would like to sit shotgun but given that the seating is limited... It's a tough call for sure. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
bluesSerenade said it all - the seating is limited - at least for most people : ) |
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