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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-03-08 12:23 PM

The infinite lies as an ocean
before your kiss .

I taste a single drop
from your lips.

More than this...and I would drown.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-08 12:26 PM

awesome!

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-08 12:38 PM

Well writen!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-08 12:46 PM

Whew!! Now, that was a kiss...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-03-08 01:01 PM

Awesome! I really love this!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-03-08 01:23 PM

Smooooch! Love this Eric!!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-08 02:51 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is so sensually beautiful and yes, you could drown, but yet you feel alive! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sahring!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-03-08 02:56 PM

You are consistent with lovely
poetry, so I must ask...how long
have you been honing your skills?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-03-08 03:01 PM

why not more than this? you would drown in the sea of love

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-08 04:48 PM

Ericc - this is just awesome - so few words - lots of passion - xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 04:49 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2003-03-08 07:14 PM

"The infinite lies as an ocean
before your kiss .

I taste a single drop
from your lips.

More than this...and I would drown."
************************************

The thirst for more will provide you with wings ...
Your poem is a sparkling gem.
Love, Margherita

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