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True Love's Kiss
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True Love's Kiss |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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When you have true love's kiss You know they are the one you want to be with The kiss sends you into another world A world that only love lives True love's kiss Is what you wish for All your life But you don't get it Until the time is right True love's kiss Lingers for hours On your lips You never want to wash it away You want it to stay One day you will learn About true love's kiss When your older And wiser And can understand what it is True love's kiss Shall last forever And ever And shall never fade Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, my friend, that one kiss is forever, if it's true.... Thoroughly enjoyed the flow of this lovely poetic thought! A truly happy person is one who |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
This poem reminds me of any kiss I'd get from you Julie.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes, only true for the moment, just enjoy it for what it is, without defining it, and its easier when it leaves town |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
"One day you will learn About true love's kiss When your older And wiser And can understand what it is True love's kiss Shall last forever And ever And shall never fade" I absolutely love that! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
True love's kiss Is what you wish for All your life But you don't get it Until the time is right How true! I am still waiting :-) Beautiful work! I like your work LOTS! |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
Ahh, the kiss that send shivers up and down the spine True love’s kiss; Excellent poem |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I thought I'd already answered this, Julie...sorry.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some nice romantic thoughts here...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your thoughts Thank you for sharing Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May you be fortunate to experience that kind of kiss, Julie. Well done! click click click |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
your last stanza read like a prayer. Amen to that! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Julie, and I do believe you are right. A "true" love's kiss will last forever--and beyond... ~ Have a great day! EA |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Ah yes, that kiss...the personal touch that never goes unfelt. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I agree Julie! Yes that first kiss.... Good write...hugs. ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Nice.... Bridgette |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You got that right, one vote from me. |
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