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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Foot of the hill ~seeing up~ wanting down. pierce my eyes with windchill that wishes to fill and take control of its weightless victims my white flag tucked in pocket stolen by devilish hand disloged with full force as i am unsuspecting racing to the top to capture my surrender carried on the same flow that races my target faster than I. retaliation of sorts too late i give up the gesture i am mistakenly seen to profess but never the fight. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gemma...this seems to be a very personal poem...and it sounds of strength... good for you!  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
An enjoable peom. i saw a lot of determination in it. the Wind is invisible. |
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