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Your Touch Is Oh, So Tender
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Your Touch Is Oh, So Tender |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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In the cold, cold night I feel you very near With your arms around me showing love so clear The warmth from your body lying next to mine You are holding me real close it certainly does feel fine Your arms are strong yet gentle as you are holding me Making me feel safe where no harm will ever be Your touch is oh, so tender as you caress me, dear With your fingertips lightly touching everywhere We are whispering our love without uttering a word With touches speaking loudly and very plainly heard ~*~ ~*~ 12/15/02 [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-08-2003 07:23 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This one is talking to me...tenderly...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, James, for your nice reply...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ethel Mae  your thoughts are ALWAYS so beautiful and serene. I am so missing these moments you speak of and know them well...sigh. you always manage to make me miss him even more. ha ha, i don't mind.lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Now THIS is MY kind of poetry! We are whispering our love without uttering a word With touches speaking loudly and very plainly heard Wonderful as usual! Soooo sweet! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, thank you so much. You always know exactly what i'm trying to say, don't you? Hugs, Ethel Mae |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Albert. That is a really nice thing to say. I appreciate it....  Hugs, Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So beautiful...! Eric |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
This one is very nice.. And oh so tender.  Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Eric. I appreciate your reply... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Connell, I'm glad that you liked it  "Love makes the world go around" |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
We are whispering our love without uttering a word Wow, I love this! So much passion and happiness in this. Great write!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Koko, for your nice comments... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) Sometimes all you need is body language to tell someone you love someone, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Feels really cozy ..... lingering tenderness. Beautiful. Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, thank you, friend Vandana, I'm glad that you liked it.... Margherita, thank you for such a sweet reply... Hugs, Ethel |
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