Open Poetry #25 |
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Living in Los Angeles (repost from CA) |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
with permission... Living in Los Angeles I’m up to drinking more than I normally would I can’t go outside walking through the neighborhood My morning coffee sitting on a wooden stool Cup of iced water sat beside the heated swimming pool Speakers in my ears as the beach goes rolling by. Shooting hoops in groups, perfect bodies meet my eye The stars move under the soles of the tourist feet Red carpet runways show us where the rich and famous meet There’s nothing like working the bar One dollar bills in my tip jar Playing blackjack upon my bed Burning incense and underfed Too little sleep and too much wine I’m finding all of the lost time Place bets on who can stay awake sat on the roof until daybreak Listen to sirens and the paramedic’s horn. It’s all good in the ‘Wood’, just keep your weapons drawn, Walk Cent’ry, two blocks East, for dollar Chinese food, Look at the pavement so my presence isn’t misconstrued. There’s nothing like working the bar One dollar bills in my tip jar Playing blackjack upon my bed Burning incense and underfed While shooting pool we drink some beer, Sublime is on for all to hear. The Angel’s touched me I believe, I might depart, I’ll never leave. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sweetwater - first off - love your name - second this is amazing reminds of RHCP "Under the Bridge" - lovely writing and gives me the feel that Im there xxoo |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Great poem. Loved it so much! Its great, it flowed, and I saw me where you discribed! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a wonderful place...I need to go...great write! |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
littlewing - thankyou.. my name is taken from the first group that performed at Woodstock - not that I was there, but they opened the historic event and not many people remember them. Thankyou Tanya, glad you liked it. Passing shadows - yes do go.. I loved living there and was sad to leave. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I've always wanted to se California... ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
Thanks James... Go and explore it as soon as you can Ethel, it's well worth the experience ![]() thanks for reading |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).. be honest...OK... I'd rewrite it as free verse... LOL... like the story you tell...and glad to see you moved this over here... not sure how I missed it when you did.. enjoyed |
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