Open Poetry #25 |
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Freeze Frame |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York ![]() |
Rushed out the door Flying . . . I see the sun setting rapidly in this bleak winter sky The small hand that is held tightly within my own is forgotten For the moment . . . I turn and stare and smile This hand which held mine throughout this frenzied day of adults stood in a knee deep puddle of water I wanted to shout yet something held me . . . I jumped into the puddle and we laughed splashed another and he smiled Only for me only for me Nothing like that smile. . . Today through the eyes of a child I realized Life is but a freeze frame those moments to be savored for eternity . . . (I dont know what you can call this but had to get it down - just happened today) [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 05:16 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just like a long long movie, life is frame after frame that just appears to move when flashed in sequence...love this SUE... hugs. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
precious snap shots for the memory. glad you shared. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Poetry like this doesn't need to be labeled. It's a slice of life..I love it. Wish I could have seen the look in his eyes too. ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - thank you so much - yes a longgggggggggggggggggg movie lol - if I had a px for every moment ahhh - TY gemma - TY so much - glad you read - was more my thoughts Poet - TY - means a lot to me - the look in his eyes was just priceless . . . xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
told you billy's lucky now believe |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph sweety - I do thank you - I truly do |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely penned. Hope you really do freeze the best moments in your mind, as it's true, they aren't repeated. I am enjoying your poetry, Sue littlewing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is just neat...really good |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY Midnite - so nice of you to say Passing - thank you so much xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do, yay! (kiss on cheek) Always embrace life with the little girl in your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehe yes there is a little girl in there somewhere TY Noah xxoo |
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