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A poem about giving up
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A poem about giving up |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
No More ~~Title How many times- Do I have to spill my heart Paint my grief inside Make the walls cry and break In exchange for a smile How many times- Do I have to sit weeping Letting my eyes erase the image That walks before me like a ghost But is never truly there How many times- Do I have to mark my hate Live through there torn scars Of emotion that preludes the end That makes my path to walk How many times- Do I wait for times to change But it sits in frozen frame Never in alter, permanent Like each days moments swallowed How many times- Do I have to say I give up That there is no more |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps you will be ahead if you cut your losses now. There does not appear to be much joy in this relationship. This was a very moving and emotional read. Sending you lots of pink loving light to mend your hurting heart... Earth Angel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LastMoments - sad write but told well. Perhaps to let go, and start anew. Best to you... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... "each days moments swallowed" .. love this ... how many times? You say it: no more! Well written. Margherita |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
LastMoments, Deeply felt. A good write. I never know if the poem is a current personal experience. In either case, Heart hugs to you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
How well I relate to this... this is an emotional, drawing-in piece. Loved it. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Last Moments - right - I ask myself this often - but somehow we keep trudging along - one day though . . . lovely xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what you mean here! trust me, you're not alone...good write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes giving up can relate to other things...like acceptance, or moving on, or looking at the situation differently. James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
If this is concerning your own relationship, I hope that you make the right decision for you....  Hugs, Ethel |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
I was right there with you! I have been many times in that same place you have just taken us too! Great read! Smile...  <~~~Like this |
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