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The Park Bench Pondering
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The Park Bench Pondering |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The park is empty on this early March twilight, The air rearranges small bits of trash for night; Then settles to a calm for the last rays of sunlight. A large truck rushes by on the narrow side street, Quickly goes along when safety should make it creep, The swirling behind it gives the dust a crude sweep. The wind blows by beneath the chilling of darkness Perfume of combustion and rubbish bins caress, Only the city glow detracts from my sadness. There is no moon to illuminate coming night There is no glad to fill my dreams in shallow sleep There is no tears to flow on my cheek with sadness. Gloom |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hmmmmmm...I so love the Gloomy writings.. Susan |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Excellent imagery |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Professor...I have missed you these last few days... you must come in from that park bench, Sir... it's still too chill to be out so late... poetic hugs...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Our park bench views are similar today. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Professor, Oh, I enjoyed the imagery. So very well written. I found the ending, not gloomy, just plain sad. Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can always relate to you |
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