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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-03-07 11:08 AM

Now,
such my Fate's intent
at the edge
Times most recent moment
on that ledge
overlooking
... and then.

Now,
as I step forward
follow through
My life rushing toward
endless you
breathlessly
... and then.

Now,
never looking back
accepting
My life on the right track
expecting
anything
... and then?

Now

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-07 11:15 AM

I loved the way you expressed your feelings. Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-03-07 11:45 AM

Take me where the tides start
so I can pull you into me

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-03-07 11:51 AM

My life rushing toward
endless you
breathlessly
... and then.

I like how you left this unfinished,
it is thought provoking indeed.
A nice write Craig~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-03-07 12:00 PM

my favourite from you yet...loved how this takes form.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-03-07 12:55 PM

I really enjoyed this write. Different from anything else I have read. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-03-07 12:57 PM

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-03-07 01:30 PM

Interesting Craig....much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-03-07 07:15 PM

yes, it comes in cycle,
listen to your inner voice, youll know its coming around again, that then is now, and now is then, ad i think im in the mood for some zen........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-03-07 07:58 PM

Never looking back ... the NOW holds everything.
Deep.
Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-03-08 04:46 PM

(sigh) Oh Craig, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always look ahead and embrace all the possibilities and accept what comes! (big hugggsssssss) Rise to the occasion, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2003-03-08 07:46 PM

Thanks one and all ....

Gem - thank you, I feel homored!! xxx

Ink - How's the zen?! Working I hope!!

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