Open Poetry #25 |
Frozen 'Deer or Sneaky Toe |
Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Balladeer and Toerag took a road trip in a car. The weather took a turn, so they didn't get too far. They pulled up to a farm house seeking shelter from the snow. The lady offered them the barn, 'cause townfolk gossip don't you know. The weather cleared the next morn and they were on their way. 'Deer got a letter from a lawyer nine months later, to the day. 'Deer asked Toe, you remember the farm house where we stayed? Toerag admitted, yes he did, then laughed about the trick he'd played. Seems Toe had gone a sneaking to that lady late that night. Had told her that his name was Balladeer and shared in her delights. After the telling 'Deer just smiled, and said "No, I'm not mad". Seems the lonely lady died last week, and left me all she had. Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing)..so 'Deer wins again... in the end.. but at least Toe made quite an impression... enjoyed this chuckle.. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL...this is cute!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lucie! Too cute! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
*LAFFIN* y'all crack me up! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, love this one Lucie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lucie, Clever, enjoyed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I recieved this one, recently, through e-mail, with different subjects, but it was fun reading it with Deer and Toe in tow. So are you the one that started the original? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so cute. I really liked it.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lucie - I remember you with a smile xxoo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
he he, with his luck this could actually happen. Very creative Lucy, and great to read your poetry again. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh Lucy....who ya gonna call when ya need help?...Balladeer?....LOL...good job you mean woman you! (Yea, but it "wasn't" Balladeer she "remembered" at heart!!!!) [This message has been edited by Toerag (03-10-2003 08:11 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Poor Toe... He only withheld his name so my feelings wouldn't be hurt... and here you go and tattle on him anyway AND Bal reaps the lady's legacy!!! Where's the fairness? LOL Great job, Lucie... I thoroughly enjoyed! *S* (And the lady obviously did, too! *EG*) |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AHA! This explains everything! Along with her check I got this letter that I never fully understood... Dear Balladeer, You have been on my mind ever since that night we spent together. Please take this money for that penile implant you so desperately need. You touched my heart with your sad story of your incapability of sexual functioning for the past 14 years and I appreciated how hard you tried even if it did end in failure. I have seen how so many people on your poetry site love you and I want to help you in some way to experience what normal men are able to achieve. Very sincerely yours, Ida Dunit Thank you, Lucie, for straightening this out!! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Funny, funny, write... And,of course, Balladeer, in his own way adds to the telling. |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
got a good laugh out of this. thank you. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
LOL! This is so funny! |
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