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Gently Into The Night......Inspired by dhick03's "Gentle The Night"
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Gently Into The Night......Inspired by dhick03's "Gentle The Night" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Gently Into The Night So gently into the night creep visions, lost to the sun of daylights commotion So gently into the night come memories thought to be hidden behind layers of dust So gently into the night sneaks ghost of your passing haunting my dreams forever So gently into the night I slip, to welcome you home and pray for dawn to never come ~ Ruth If God brings you to it, He will bring you through it. [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (03-07-2003 02:38 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank goodness for lovely inspiration... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ruth, Very soft and lovely. The last three lines, my favorite. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Within the hold of love, who needs dawn, indeed... Lovely, m'friend...  |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is absolutely beautiful, thank you for sharing this with us Andrew |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful, Beautiful As all your poetry Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth...Lovely, soft and sheltered. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, As soft as a kitten. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I just love the "fluency" your poetry always has, all the colors seem to merge and such beauty is always fingerpainted from your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ruth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-07-2003 01:37 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very soft and lovely Ruth. I enjoyed it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very gentle...very softly written. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Lovely, just lovely. Thank you for sharing this gem with us. INclan |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
very smooth, soft and gentle poem So gently into the night sneaks ghost of your passing haunting my dreams forever I know exactly what you mean |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
hoot_owl_rn - the night, gentle, soft, romantic, I like it... BC |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone, I must say I'm surprised at the response to this as I wrote it in less than 5 minutes as a reply to dhicks03's poem, it's amazing how sometimes ideas just come to you and other times one can't write for months |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
This is an amazingly beautiful piece of writing. The title reminded me of Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, but I liked this poem better.Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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