Division (a series) part 1

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Open Poetry #25

Division (a series) part 1

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-16 04:46 PM

Division(a series)part 1

pulled
I find myself
divided between
sand and sea
straddling both
flat footed
unable to choose
one or the other
how do I become
a one-sided lover
torn between
these two
in this
three way love affair
being taffyed
always between
asking for attention
slightly slighting one
where can I find
balance between
the whirling of
the untamed
and the solid
of the sand

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-02-16 04:56 PM

very nicely done..

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-02-16 05:07 PM

Excellent I am intrigued

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-02-16 09:57 PM

It isn't easy, Lady.
I love this..specially the comparison to taffy.

Looking for the others.

and..
you are missed also.

SARCASM BREEDS A BROKEN HEART, and I have enough cracks. Please stop breaking me!

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

4 posted 2003-02-16 10:05 PM

Mmm going quickly to find the other parts to this!! Good job slick!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

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