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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Late evening and the sweet peace hit my soul All around me losing ourselves Intense room and dark light You come to take a peak But take a last step You shut the door It’s vibrant, intense Your nobody and it feels good No need to breath Other forces are keeping you alive These new hours it doesn’t matter For these lost hours don’t worry They don’t even exist I got a little piece of heavan Walking hand in hand Flirting with temptation But you love me and leave me And when you leave I’m empty I crumble to pieces and fade away You leave me so empty Sperari |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like the way you move from anticipation to emptiness... good transition! *S* |
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