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Let the Rain Pour
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Let the Rain Pour |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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We run Into the pouring Rain With our New found love We dance And hold each other tight As tight Can be As we let the rain pour Down on us We look into each Others eyes And speak through them Our true love As slowly We draw our lips close For a kiss In the pouring rain With water flowing Down our wet faces We think in happiness Let the rain pour For we don't care Nothing will change our love Not even being soaked By the downpour of rain Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
How true it is. Our love can't die Julie - it's too strong.   What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty write woman! TD |
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Ellen Junior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 35 |
the_loner_23 Nice write, thanks for sharing |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
thanks for bringing back fond memories :-) one of my favorite kisses is one I had in the pouring rain...*Sigh* :-) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, I am happy for you and hope it always rains diamond thoughts and golden promises for you, well-done, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is what I'm talkin' 'bout. Rain! So beautiful, I love thinking of those mud puddle fights as a kid and the hugs that have so much more comfort and meaning when the rain confirms the closeness. Lovely!!! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...james |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Julie - liked this much - especially since yesterday I was splashing through the puddles with my son - diff theme I know but same though - almost - very nice xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, isn't it fun to be out in the rain with your Love? "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I may be young to say Im inlove.. But I have been going steady with one girl for 4 years.. And It sure feels like love. Good poem. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
Beautiful.. I love the rain and playing in it too.. thanks for reminding me  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This makes me ache for spring showers. Much enjoyed. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Julie, you are truly growing as a writer... good job! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very romanitc! Enjoyed. Deb |
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