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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-03-12 07:44 AM

Axis of Evil
seven deadly sins
Bloodshed by our hand
voted in

Freeworld superpower
at Dantes' feet we fall
Rounded up like cattle
journalists enthrall

(Father, forgive them, they know not what they write)

Razor blades and duct tape
feast for our planes
Armegeddon
Hello again

Call me a patriot
my heart does not lie
For my country
I would surely die

Axis of Evil
sadistic grin
Revelation
Is creeping in

Dedicated to Lukas - who inspires me so
Thank You

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-13-2003 07:59 AM).]

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-03-12 09:29 AM

Thank you for saying what so needed to be said, in a way that is impossible to ignore.

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-03-12 09:43 AM

littlewing
Excellent write, enjoyed.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-03-12 09:55 AM

Very good write, indeed...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-12-2003 09:56 AM).]

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-03-12 11:06 AM

Said very well!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-12 11:36 AM

Sue, you did say it very well.
Thank you.
Hugs,
Ethel

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-12 11:36 AM

Ahhh, Nice. I cant really explain. But it gave me the creeps.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-03-12 11:37 AM

Your voice speaks loud and clear. Outstanding work littlewing~

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2003-03-12 11:49 AM

uh huh yeah what they said!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-12 07:40 PM

Rat - your welcome - glad you got it

Sy - Sun & Brad Thank you very much for reading

Ethel - thanks - always nice to see you reading

Connel - sorry = gave me the creeps too

Blues - thank you for your kind words

C- lol - thank you

This was a convo between my friend and I discussing the latest events - my writing depicts the events starting from WWI and leading to the present day situation.

Thanks guys xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-03-13 01:15 PM

Sorry Im late on this... this is awesome Sue, love this.Powerful and well written i love watching you flourish here

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-03-13 05:23 PM

Thanks Raph - it is from much of your writing that inspires me to keep writing - thank you for opening my eyes . . . xxoo

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