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Ladies_Rogue
New Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 7
Mississippi

0 posted 2003-03-06 02:45 PM

I went to a country bar last Saturday night
where I meet a man in cowboy boots
who was drunk and keep spilling his nasty tasting beer on me as he would scream Yee Haw

I asked him to behave in a civilized way
and I would even be willing to pay for the coffee to sobor him up

He said he wanted a fight
I gave him one full of delight
words of wisdom I hit him with as
he appeared to not want another dish

I noticed his face turn red and his fist ball up
I keep talking he told me to shut it or he would kick my butt

I laughed and pointed at him as I went to speak
He popped me and I lost some teeth
What is wrong with this man has he no humor

He beat me all around the room chased me like a Tom And Jerry cartoon
Thats the last time
I accuse a red neck of dating his sister

Because no matter how quick of tongue
sometimes fist get it done

My buddy told me to try writing a poem since I like to read them lets see how I have done.

[This message has been edited by Ladies_Rogue (03-06-2003 02:46 PM).]

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

1 posted 2003-03-06 04:45 PM

lol...like a Tom and Jerry cartoon. Simple and a bit humourous...I like it

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-03-06 05:17 PM

Welcome to Passions! So that's how you spent last Saturday evening! Well, your experience certainly was food for the fodder and grist for the mill! I guess you learned a valuable lesson: Never accuse a redneck of dating his sister! lol

Interesting read!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-06 07:46 PM

(giggles in delight) Let this be a lesson to everyone, never get a sister involved in the conversation! LOL! This is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, I love it, I just know you will write many more wonderful poems, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Henry, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, thank you for sharing, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Henry, thank you for sharing!