Open Poetry #25 |
Again |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Again Questions are all I seem to have. No answers to any or all. Each day I awake thinking positive, then the word comes to make my mood fall. He's too young to be needing more prayers like this, been through enough, our dear friend. It's grown again, sized the same as before. Our hopes have been shadowed again. A seizure, attacked when we thought he looked good. Radiation, thought helping, now finds, he's too young to be needing more prayers like this and no words in my mind can unwind. So smart, good looking, the sweetest of man still single and charming, his way. He's too young to be needing more prayers like this, as I go to his aid on this day. I feel for him, as if he were mine, a friend, the age of a son. And I long for his cure, to relieve all his pain, I wish and I pray it be done. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have added to the prayers for him by writing this plaintive plea for his recovery. I am sure that most of the readers of such impassioned poetry will offer up prayers for him as well...........I just did. ~ Sending lots of Light, Love, & Prayers, EA |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
so sad, and your prayers are so beautiful. My best to your friend in a fine recovery, with people like you to look out for him, he's got the best of care. Peace |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, your heart-felt prayer for your friend was beautiful. Mine are going up as well..... Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Maureen, this is so well written! I love the repetition, it lends force and pathos to the poem. Well done indeed! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
perhaps you have the answer to your question be his friend what could be more valuable to him now or ever? w.g. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
hes lucky to have someone like you in his corner |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Very emotional, And very well done. He has my thoughts and prayers as well... |
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