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drift a down slowly |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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dark angel justice allowances of the ghosts they come knock on my brain quicksilver holding liquid--I scold you-- letting you pattern my pain... always so different (I hear refrain) raindrops in measure of then. Give me a reason a sharp edge of tin tell me why I'd try again... I'll drift a down slowly and you give me vein of a pulse giving meat to my teeth. grifting life lowly dulling...belief, to make up for the lack of me... let me chew gristle of all thought of you give me the fog of all that you seem. I skirt the thistle of meadow-sharp dew and digging the burrs drawing blood from my knees... tell me you love me... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (03-06-2003 07:11 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Karen, ladydeee, you're the best! keeping this. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.... to be told is often the things we bloody ourselves over the worst... nicely done my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dark angel justice allowances of the ghosts they come knock on my brain quicksilver holding liquid--I scold you-- letting you pattern my pain... always so different (I hear refrain) raindrops in measure of then. Give me a reason a sharp edge of tin tell me why I'd try again... ============================== ahh my cryptic queen of symbolism and metaphor..my princess of personif... my Ra-goddess of rhyme  you rock and it rolls me   The moth loves ya and she'll tell ya, does that count? *L* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - this one aches - always singing - always dancing - your words they touch my soul - Give me a reason a sharp edge of tin tell me why I'd try again... xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - witch of the cypress, out of the mist she comes with words as these. The mist rises as your words touch... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's getting down to the nitty gritty Serenity~ I'm speechless.....yowser! You be the good witch~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here* Yur so good! Hugs YOU!  ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I am going to return to this when my brain isn't fried, because I love it. Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
eeeeeeeeeegads this is spellbinding stuff... ohhh to have a mind like yours! I get chills reading it. Beautifully done. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...yes, you got the words and the soul, love where you go.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I know I love you Grins and hugs [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-07-2003 11:08 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always find myself with mouth falling open when I read you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this one was kind of special to me so I thank you all much... was trying for a bit of the Celtic.... hugs, all. mmmmyummies.  |
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