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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:42 PM

My lady angel,
so silken
in my desires,
for as I touch you,
You melt my heart.

A fragrance so fresh,
the mind wanders
over your treasures
of pure intoxication,
as my soul blossoms,
in my lips,
needing your.

Caresses so tantalizing,
every nerve responding,
from your magic spells,
creating ecstatic charges
thundering within,
My whispered sighs.

A man, in everyway,
could never be more pleased,
for the woman inside you,
takes the feelings farther
than a million cupid love birds,
Cooing in reverberation.

In your sweetness
my taste for you
has developed,
to last for all time.
A delicacy,
a wine vintage
so exquisite,
in its endless arousal.

Bringing back
Rose pedals
spread over satin sheets,
revealing your beauty
in contrasting detail,
to be devoured
in words saying
over and over
“I Love You So.”

Nobody special, just practicing the words for the angel of my fantasy.
D.Lester Young 3/5/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-03-05 02:54 PM

mmm beautiful. Soft, delicate, LOVEly

I enjoyed this alot. soo sweet.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-03-06 07:02 AM

Looks like you have the practicing down pretty good...James

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-03-06 07:37 AM

dang...if that's just practice I can't imagine the real thing but 10x better :-)

Awesome....

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-03-06 08:09 AM

Beautiful and lyrical.
Eric

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

5 posted 2003-03-06 08:10 AM

Excellent Work

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-07 10:10 PM

D - this is so passionate - goodness - beautiful writing - save this for that lucky lady xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-03-08 03:13 AM

practice makes perfect

good stuff!

Kristine
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 92
Mahal Kita!!!

8 posted 2003-03-09 03:12 AM

Awww just beautiful. loved it!

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-03-09 03:17 AM

What a wonderful poem. I love the imagery and the beauty in this piece. Nice job.

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