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Private Dance
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Private Dance |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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The lights are low and the music's slow And you're here with me We're alone in a crowded bar Surrounded by people, we are both far away Lost in our togetherness Together all alone As the music's swirling magic starts To close around us We lose all consciousness of thought The rhythm of your body, I get lost in you Our hearts become as one As one as we are two |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully romantic |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
i went out last night for a drink for the first time since coming home from the us and ahh, i noticed something just now with your words....being drunk is very much alike to the feeling of love. And finding the one who you know you'll spend the rest of your life with...well thats alcoholism and ahh so well put was your poem, something in the first verse caught me, like a tripwire i guess. Excellent  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is very nice indeed. I love the atmosphere you create so effortlessly. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice ringo, needs a drum beat, but i hear your kid is the real drummer in the family |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very nice Ringo - romantic . . . xxoo lol Michele |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Very nice; I enjoyed the romance of it. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm....yes, very nicely done!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
Lovely. What a nice dance! Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Private dances are always the best ones, and this is lovely. Very well done Ringo. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 romantic..loved itIf at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Outstanding. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Brad I really loved this one and the imagery was wonderful. "Love - bittersweet, irrepressible - loosens the limbs and I tremble" Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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