to an empty bottle of whiskey

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Open Poetry #25

to an empty bottle of whiskey

noah j
Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 82
on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2003-03-05 01:47 AM

"to an empty bottle of whiskey"

i--
i fell in love once
left my bleeding heart,
open and crying on the stairs
as you,
you calmly walked within the
wide open confines of your
confusing, chaotic life.
i opened myself hoping
good things would
approach me in the dead calm sea
of the night
as i softly whispered secrets into
the silent darkness--
Hoping someone would hear.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-03-05 01:51 AM

I speak often to my seagrams 7, she whispers back "I pollute you", and I sigh and say "I know you whore", and pour another shot.Nice read Noah, welcome to the forums.
Jason

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2003-03-05 02:36 AM

Soulful write. I enjoyed it. Welcome to our humble home.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-03-05 02:43 AM

enjoyed the write...welcome to Passions!

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

4 posted 2003-03-05 02:45 AM

Very well done. Welcome to the board. I look forward to reading more of your thoughts.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-03-05 12:17 PM

you calmly walked within the
wide open confines of your
confusing, chaotic life.
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The danger zone...best be careful.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-03-05 12:44 PM

Jason yours talk back too!? I though it was just mine. Cognac for me, not cause its more sophisticated but because it could be, making the abuse of it a more degeneratively fun..oh Noah btw great write..weeeee im gone

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-05-2003 12:44 PM).]

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2003-03-05 02:47 PM

hmm...personally, I think my vodka and I are going to have a "heart to heart" tonight...

Great job...

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