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Open Poetry #25

This Dream (cinquain)

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Member Rara Avis

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0 posted 2003-03-05 12:53 PM

This dream,
such sadness if
it never came to be;
and worse, if it did come true, such
sorrow.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-03-05 01:09 AM

Catch 22 Heller understood too well the sick and twisted irony that is life, so do you my friend. excellent write. To bed I go, but had to reply first

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-05-2003 01:09 AM).]

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

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With my darkling

2 posted 2003-03-05 01:36 AM

Well said, I will have to read up on this form.
Jason

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-05 02:02 AM

Ed, you know that I enjoyed this.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2003-03-05 02:54 AM

yea...sure 'nuff

Martie

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5 posted 2003-03-05 09:50 AM

Ed..I like the way such a few words can so complete a thought. Wish I didn't understand this so well.

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Member Rara Avis

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6 posted 2003-03-05 09:52 AM

Don't we all!

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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7 posted 2003-03-05 10:51 AM

...the proverbial "catch 22"

Warm hugs,
EA

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