Open Poetry #25 |
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When God Doesn't Answer Yes |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
When God Doesn’t Answer Yes How often we’ve earnestly prayed a request Then saddened when God didn’t answer, “Yes” Our faith in Him then perhaps waned Feeling our prayers had been in vain Remember when Jesus, in prayer, asked If it be possible let this cup pass? Because the Father didn’t say, “Yes” We’re offered eternal happiness So next time we pray for an answer Trust the wisest to come from our Father And if He doesn’t answer, “Yes” Perhaps others, though us, He’ll bless |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
sandgrain,I also believe that sometimes god answers no Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
good poem. Some times the best prayers are those that go unanswered. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
A great write. Proving oncee again that the door is never shut without first a window being opened. Your critique request says you need all the help you can get...I suggest you need no help at all. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, sandy one... and it's great to see you posting again! *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Sandgrain.. absolutely! Maree. p.s adding to my library. ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sand - this is so touching - I think we need to listen a whole lot more too - BUT yes sometimes we need to learn and thats where the no comes in - very nice xxoo |
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Connel![]()
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Who are we to question god? and if he ever does answer no, he has his reasons.. Nothing done on earth is done for a reason. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Aah, melodious theological poetry. I love the idea expressed in this, and the flow of it. Really, I don't see any need for "help". Just keep doing what you're doing, and practice makes excellence, since there is no perfection. ^_^ |
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