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Open Poetry #25

Let There Be...

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-03-04 06:49 PM

Arise golden
from ashes
betray darkness
with prismatic flair
shower diamonds upon
her ebb & flow
but save your
fiery kiss for
evening's good-bye

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

1 posted 2003-03-04 06:51 PM

me likes.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-03-05 06:49 AM

very pretty and visual, felt like i was watching the sunrise and sunset break over the ocean

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-03-05 07:19 AM

... a soft and pleasurable feeling to this.
*s
M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-03-05 07:51 AM

Sunkissed
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

5 posted 2003-03-05 09:30 AM

JP, I'm glad that you do. Thank you!

InkedGoddess, that's exactly what I was going for. Thank you
for seeing!

Nakdthoughts, thank you for such a kind comment!

Seymour, I'm glad that you enjoyed. Thank you!

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-03-05 12:16 PM

SunKissed~
This is just lovely.

Sharing that my favorite 'word-visual' is of the sun tiptoeing to the water's edge, extinguishing the day in a sizzle~

You captured that moment well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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