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Open Poetry #25

Melt Of Me

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-04 04:44 PM

Melt Of Me

blow out
the candle
no need
to burn
this melt
of me
is now
my turn

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

1 posted 2003-03-04 04:51 PM

having not lit the candel i see no need to blow it out nice write
>>phantom poet<<<

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-03-04 05:04 PM

Very sensual.
Eric

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-04 05:23 PM

Very good, Helen...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-03-04 06:14 PM

I think it would be more fun to melt you...

nicely done ...as always

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

5 posted 2003-03-05 05:09 PM

2 melts to go please
Oh yeah and a strawberry shake extraaa THICK

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