Open Poetry #25 |
Forgive Me Father |
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Forgive Me Father for I have sinned it has been eternity since my last confession I sit here before you now seeking repentance for living my life I only did what I felt was right You never told me that it would be like this Wait, you did now didnt you? I didnt listen . . . Until now I guess |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
wow! I think these will be the words spoken by many people come that day.... Enjoyed the read & the wake up call... BlueEyes |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
wow... talk about reading my life... you're beginning to scare me!!!! lol Keep up the amazing work, and think about this for the book |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I don't listen often until trials and tragedy wake me up. No wonder my life is such a mess! no wonder all our lives our. We're stubborn. But I just praise the Lord my sins were taken, past present and future, as He rose again, and now I live too. Like this alot Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
littlewing you flew away with this one terrfect write >>phantom poet<< |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Blue - wake up call ding . . ding . . . hehehe TY Ringo - hehehe I scare you - lil ole me nahhh - TY makes me feel good to know you can relate GG - I agree - suffering forced me to listen sadly and I am still stubborn Phantom - so sweet - flappin my wings . . . Im tryin . . . TY GUYS xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I dunno what if the problem is not that someone didn't listen but that he doesn't. hmmm thought provoking glad you somehow found your way here.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - I think it is both - mostly timing - you want Him to speak and He wants you to listen - is confusing - and ahhh . . . I have no idea how I got here - someone just picked me up one day and sat me here hehehehehe xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY for the reply Shadows |
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