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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2003-03-04 02:26 PM

Awake, my child
brush the glitter from your hair

Look around you
Beware

Rebirth of your soul
Salvation
Inebriation
has clouded your senses for far too long

Resuscitation
Breathe . . .
take a deep breath now
Inhale
the clean, cool crisp fresh air

Awake, awake my child
and brush the glitter from your hair

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

1 posted 2003-03-04 02:27 PM

nice write
>>phantom poet<<

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2003-03-04 02:52 PM

Nicely Done

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

3 posted 2003-03-04 02:54 PM

very good....you say so much so succintly...
and the glitter...wonderful phrasing...in our soul and in reality...glitter is hard to get rid of without leaving traces

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-03-04 03:28 PM

Very sweet and beautiful.
Eric

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-03-04 03:33 PM

littlewing/(Sue?)

Oh my. This is truly special. I've read it three times, and each time it becomes more beautiful.

In one of my poems you wrote: "Your words are but ones I wish to write", a wonderful compliment to me, of course, but believe me, you are very talented yourself and this is unique and a joy to read.
Look forward to more of your work.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-04 03:40 PM

Phantom Ericc and Ringo Ty so very much!

jelly - TY yes sadly glitter does tend to hide in the corners now doesnt it? wishful thinking hmmmm . . .

Pat - TY once again - I really needed that - such a sweet soul xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-03-04 06:02 PM

I have seen that glitter
in a young girl's hair...

this is lovely!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-03-04 10:06 PM

More please

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-04-2003 10:06 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-03-04 10:09 PM

Sue, I can see that I'm really going to enjoy your poetry. It's beautiful....

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-04-2003 10:15 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-03-05 02:08 AM

Sunshine - TY yes I have too sadly . . .
Raph - what? more glitter??? *laughing*
Ethel TY so very much xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-03-05 03:15 AM

really beautiful

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-03-05 10:04 AM

Ty passing so very much

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