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Open Poetry #25

Singing the Blues

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-03 04:38 PM

After last night
I may never hear
Your voice
Ever again

Once my parents are home
The calls will stop
If they even knew
He called me
They would block
The phone number

I am singing the blues
For my parents
Come home tomorrow
And the calls stop
Tonight

His handsome voice
I will hear no more
I feel like
Crying
At the thought of that

Singing the Blues

Cold hands means a warm heart

[This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (03-03-2003 04:43 PM).]

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

1 posted 2003-03-03 04:42 PM

very creative

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-03-03 05:04 PM

Very heart felt and beautiful.
Eric

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

3 posted 2003-03-03 05:33 PM

nicely thought

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

4 posted 2003-03-03 07:32 PM

But you'll hear my voice again Julie. I have to hear your voice now.

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