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They Danced By Moonlight
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They Danced By Moonlight |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Swaying slowly to rhythm of soft music, they danced by the moonlight Stars glistened in the black velvet sky above them, looking as if they were diamonds In the background they heard sounds of waves, gently splashing on the white sands of the beach As the song finishes playing they kiss in a long sensual kiss of passion While listening to soft whispers from the gentle breeze, they hear the love from their hearts They held each other closely wishing they could stay here for the rest of their lives Dancing by moonlight ~~~~~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Aww this is so pretty! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
very moving |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel--This sounds so perfectly romantic! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! Oh, sigh! You just recreated one of my most favorite moments in time...Thank you! May you and I have many more such moments---but preferably with the man of our dreams and not with each other! tehe Warm hugs, Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I enjoyed this dance! Eric |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, so romantic. I could hear the waves lapping on the beach as I read this. Wonderful write Ethel. How are you feeling? I've been holding you in my prayers ... huggles, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Very nice write!! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I loved your poem, Ethel. Everything fit perfectly together. the Wind is invisible. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is very pretty always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh who can resist to join you in dancing by the moonlight .... beautiful. Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very pretty picture ethel, enjoying the promise of spring , warm starry nights and all |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream ever so much to get to dance with my girl in the moonlight in the near future! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
One of the many things I enjoy is a romantic dance by moonlight. Thank you for the dance!!  |
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dashock07 New Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 4 |
i luv this poem its so warm.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brad, Thank you for saying it's pretty. I appreciate it......  Vandana, I'm really glad that you like it..... Julie, Thanks for thinking it's beautiful. That's sweet. RK, Thanks for the nice words. I appreciate them very much. Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, I really appreciate your sweet words. I'm glad that you liked it..... Linda, I'm glad this brought back good memories. Yeah, I want more of them with Gary.... and you with your dream man.. LOL Eric, I'm glad that you enjoyed the dance... Martie, Thank you for liking the poem and for asking how I'm feeling. I'm still not feeling too well. My doctor called in a different kind of antibiotic for me today. Thank you for keeping me in your prayers and please continue to.... Heart Hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Phantom Poet, Thank you very much for reading and leaving a nice reply..... Liz, Hi, little friend. It's good to see you here. Thank you for liking the poem...... Rita, Thank you, sweet friend, for liking it.... Margherita, Yes, isn't it a wonderful thought? Heart Hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, Oh yeah, I'll be glad when Spring gets here, too..... Noah, I hope you and your dream girl will be dancing in the moonlight very soon. Albert, I'm glad that you like the romantic dance..... dashock07, Thank you for loving the poem and the sweet words..... Heart hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - you romantic you, this is lovely... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
waiting for my moonlight dance... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, from one romantic to another...thank you...LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Dixie.... Hugs, Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well.... I just discovered that dancing by moonlight can be pretty nice in the morning sunshine -- thanks for jump-starting my day... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want to live this...James |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Words expressed are words from the heart >>phantom poet<< |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So very beautiful.... first note to lingering melody. *S* |
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