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Open Poetry #25

Encourage Me....Please

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-03-03 02:53 PM

Encourage Me...Please

I'm not sure why she
offers me so much yet
gives me so little.

I'm not ready to concede
that this strategy
doesn't have much
of a chance to succeed.

I will require
a little more
encouragement before
I'm willing to proceed.

Encourage me...please.

JamesLee
March03
2003

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-03-03 02:54 PM

yes James, sometimes we need a bit of encouragement to move us on....very well written.

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-03-03 02:56 PM

Good write. Everyone needs a good kick of encouragement in the arse sometimes.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2003-03-03 06:32 PM

Made me think back a litte...

Anyways..... good write (like always)

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

4 posted 2003-03-03 06:34 PM

very nice.. well written, enjoyed

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

5 posted 2003-03-03 07:06 PM

James good write

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-03-03 07:07 PM

Be encouraged by the mystery itself.
Lovely poem.
Margherita

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2003-03-03 07:09 PM

Liked this alot...

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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