Open Poetry #25 |
The Other Side |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The rough waves of pristine water Silence of the raging storm Center of a cyclonic universe The inner tranquility to carry on Life’s endless trials Live many trails Each path having it own rough terrain Every obstacle its own lesson Yet some challenges may have to wait For the tools within the mind Have not developed yet For brute strength will never be enough Then there comes the time to move forward In the pain of living your life For the weight of others Have put a burden on your dreams Now their doubts and criticism Overshadow your zeal Casting too much gloom to bear So you flounder, sink and rise To get to the other side In everything that says no You do not have the strength to make it A prayer from inside Will fight its lonely song In echoes behind you laughing Saying you are stupid to try But going back, would say they won So you will put your life on a limb That broke the bond And float with it against all odds On the faith of other dreamers The lanterns of the faithful Will line the shores As if it was a lighthouse Awaiting its sailor home The Lord said, “believe in Me for I am your savior” and in tears running down my face I replied, “My hidden faith in you will propel me forward.” I must believe there is a purpose for my words! I just had a bad day! D.Lester Young 3/3/2003 Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (03-03-2003 02:08 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For the weight of others Have put a burden on your dreams Now their doubts and criticism Overshadow your zeal Casting too much gloom to bear So you flounder, sink and rise To get to the other side In everything that says no You do not have the strength to make it A prayer from inside Will fight its lonely song ...so much truth M |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
With the Lord on your side, you don't need the rest. Joyce |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I especially enjoyed your closing stanza. This poem was filled with truth and wisdom. Warm hugs, EA |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very truthful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BlackWolf New Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9 |
Quite honest farce of often unspoken truths about ourselves, and relationships with others. Deep thinking compadre. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Heart hugs to you Dave. You simply cannot give like you do through your wonderful poetry and not receive back. And, Joyce is right, of course. In His own time is the key. Thanks for sharing, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Friend, you do speak truth in your poetry. Always like to read your work, even if I don't reply every time. Sometimes I just don't know what to say. Hugs, Ethel |
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