Open Poetry #25 |
I Hear You [from Spiritual] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I Hear You… My child, I've heard your whispers when you speak to the silence in your mind, you ask me what I see in you if I see in you any reason or rhyme. I see the great cheer in you and in you I see the delight, as you go forth to the less fortunate and guide them through the night. I see the shame in you for past transgressions wrought, I see the forgiveness that you ask for you've realized what can't be bought. I see in you, my child, the hurt over your stubborn pride, and I would ask that you continue to pray and from me, never hide. I see past pain, and continued hope I see troubled shadows creep within, I see you raise your eyes to heaven I see the tremble in your chin. In your eyes I see your grace, I see the tears well up in your eyes every time you lift your face your love cannot be compromised. I see a heart that bares its soul I see you impart great golden goals even though yours have not been met you've prayed to me, I don't forget. I see you try to do your best, and every day you wonder "oh my ~ did I slip, break a heart, or worse?" that's when I caught you on the fly. O my child, continue on, do your best in my name and continue please to pray to me, and I will keep you from shame. Love, God ©KRJ 22 June 2000 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Karilea... Such a calming uplifting feeling as I read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Another great one. This one really makes me feel good that I went to church yesterday. I love reading your work, I really do. They make me feel great and cause me to think about so many things. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I know that this is pure and unto God, by the tears in my eyes....thank you sunshine |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, so beautiful, and a keeper for me... Thank you, sweet lady, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and I hear you, Dear One. ~ The beauty of your inner light glows on these pages... Love & Light, EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mom,I needed this....so full of wisdom and his love.... very lovely lady... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. Joyce |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful. You are at your best when you use rhyme...I missed out so much on the story line that you and Cpat have written that I can't know where to begin... hugssss M *when are you going to stop fooling around with that pretty picture of yours??? |
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