Open Poetry #25 |
I Can't Recall |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I Can't Recall I can't recall the last kiss, the one that spoke more to me than words. I can't recall the last touch of arms around, that would show me the feelings in your heart. ~~*~~ I can't recall togetherness, when here I sit alone. But I recall the lost look in eyes, the look I should have known. ~~*~~ I can't recall the moment that I could put one love behind me, and open up to another. I can't recall how it was that I could let you overwhelm my life, and make each morning worthwhile. ~~*~~ I can't recall, exactly how nor the moment when, I met you once or maybe twice and fell in love again. ~~*~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, I can't recall the first thing I read of yours, but it rang so true I knew I'd have to read everything you post. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I can't recall, exactly how nor the moment when, I met you once or maybe twice and fell in love again. This is utterly perfect! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...thoughts known well by me... |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
You write sooo good. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I do see why we are kindred spirits...sigh wonderful write |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
oh yeah i can relate this enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Midnitesun, you are very sweet. Thank you for reading and responding. *s Nightshade, it's nice when someone can feel your words. Thank you. passing shadows, always on my mind too. Thank you Dixie. rkcraig, I appreciate your responses. jellybeans, I am glad you think so. When I read yours I feel as if you know me. vandana, it's good to relate, once in awhile hugs all M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thankfully love IS revolving door, one closes the other opens, IF you allow it to enter again, sweet poem |
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