Open Poetry #25 |
Sunday In Paradise |
CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
On Sunday morning All the waves in purest white kneeling on the beach Steeples reach in praise gatherers meet with a kiss heavenly choirs singing tradewinds journey fair morning doves cry out love song leopard clouds kiss blue shadows hide at noon sunbathers sizzle to brown dancing azure waves hammock on lanai mango tango sherbet ice slack key melodies ominous gray clouds packing suitcase comes to town rainmakers showdown Poetry is: |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoyed the leopard clouds... that triggered some imagination... a lovely vision, Cher... if I come, may I visit? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CSKpoet Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sounds beautiful... *s M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such harmony! Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I want some mango tango sherbet ice, I wish I lived right by the ocean so I could feel the rain much more often, the desert is nice but I've got to see the rest of the colors! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Sounds like paradise, I need a vacation. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful descriptive writing...I like the pineapple flavor...James |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Cheryl, Hi. This sounds wonderful. Wish I was there. Hope you are well. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cheryl, this is beautiful...very descriptive. PSSST.......I also like that you wrote each verse in the 5-7-5 syllable form. Are these senryu or haiku? I confuse which they are all the time. I know that haiku is about nature, though. I love to do these, too. Aren't they fun? Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm a comin'! I'm headin' for that tropical paradise! ~ Aloha! EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi Cher....I lived on Maui for about ten years, many moons ago. When you write like this it takes me back all over again. My sis is leaving tomorrow morning to spend the week, while I sit here going no where. Enjoyed this piece of paradise you wrote~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! |
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