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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-02 11:43 PM

Breath Be A Sigh

I wish
to soothe you
ease your
worried mind
chase all
your trouble
just put
your fears aside
where breath
be a sigh
here are
my arms
come rest
in my heart

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-03-02 11:45 PM

And though we don't know each other...........this made me want rush into your arms.Very beautiful.
Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (03-02-2003 11:50 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-03-02 11:47 PM

I second Jasons reply, I love this title

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-02 11:47 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) May all your worries be pushed aside as love sings in you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

4 posted 2003-03-03 12:24 PM

mmmmmmmmmmmmm
you write "invite" sooooo warmly !

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-03-03 01:35 AM

I pictured a mother speaking to her child here... so beautiful, warm, inviting.. made me sigh.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-03 02:07 AM

Lady - so few words spoken - many feelings conveyed - absolutely warm xxoo

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-03-03 10:07 AM

an inviting "rest", to be sure

Rf

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-03-03 02:44 PM

Nothing like a little encouragement...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2003-03-03 02:56 PM

Absolutely wonderful write Helen! I'm keeping this, so very much said in so few words.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-03-03 03:07 PM

Helen, I love the way you do this....you can speak volumes in such few words.....

I've been trying to learn to do that, but haven't accomplished it yet...

Heart Hugs

Ethel

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

11 posted 2003-03-06 11:18 AM

open it and i will

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

12 posted 2003-03-06 04:26 PM

"come rest
in my heart"

Love this!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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