call it love (not depressing like some of my other poems)

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Open Poetry #25

call it love (not depressing like some of my other poems)

ben_pelling
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.

0 posted 2003-03-02 08:33 PM

Call It Love
Our eyes lock
and million emotions are stirred in me;
Feeling of destiny and the thought
that nothing so perfect could ever be.
I talked to you just hours ago,
and yet already I'm missing you;
other than in fairy tales,
could a love like this ever be true?
The face I'd known for years
is suddenly the face in all my dreams,
and suddenly you've shown me that love
is not just a storybook theme.
Eyes that were not looking for it
suddenly found a kindred heart,
and now I'm missing a piece of me
whenever we're apart.
I'm a little scared
because all of this is so new,
and yet I've never felt so safe before
as I do when I'm with you.
Understanding this
would be like trying to map out the stars,
who knows what happens that moment
when the distance is crossed between two hearts.
All I know is that you're there
in a place of me I didn't know there was;
and although a word couldn't possibly describe this feeling,
for lack of one I'll call it love.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-02 08:42 PM

I really enjoyed this. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-03-02 09:01 PM

You captured what being in love is all about

MissKlarmic
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since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

3 posted 2003-03-02 09:16 PM

Nice write , admirable

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