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FINAL STRAW
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FINAL STRAW |
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cjbuckys New Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 8 |
This is the final straw, This is the curtain call, This is the end of it all, My life seems so little and used, I want to disappear in a foggy midst, I want to shatter into a thousand pieces, My mental state is frozen, Put me in the white jacket, Put me in a padded room, One voice heard, everything is blurry, Nothing makes sense, Everything is vanishing before my eyes, I have no control any longer, I’m sick of your questions, I’m sick of your lies, I’m sick of your teachings, I’m sick of your helping, Putting me down, Lifting me up, This is my final straw, This is my curtain call, This is my end to it all.. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
powerful, i like it, the rhyme scheme just makes me want to keep reading. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definately the end of the rope here |
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