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The attic |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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meromries half dead, lost in the dust photographs told past lies, over creaking floorboards faces stareing out that window stole a glimpse of the moon, storms spent waiting in the dark one candle had enough light, enough for an eternity because time stood still in the attic the Wind is invisible. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Kind of makes me want to break out the old photo albums. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wind..hello there!  Your writing is so good for a person as young as yourself. Keep up the good work. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done sweetie. Much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
one candle had enough light, enough for an eternity because time stood still in the attic I'd argue with nightshade that with lines like these, your writing is amazing for one of any age. Excellent work [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-02-2003 09:51 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Liz, yes, when something is tucked away much of its meaning and coherence is lost, and that can be eerie! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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