Open Poetry #25 |
Echoes From Jupiter |
Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Half way through midnight his guiding light flickered, blinked, cast it's glow elsewhere Half way through determination & my temptation it became clear, I am here alone. Sunkissed. [This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-16-2003 07:54 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, I think your username is the best one anyone could have ever come up with...they always seem to add the final line to your poetry... and why isn't this a submission for the book? Hmmmm? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
born alone, die alone, holding on to the inbetween, liked this mid of the night insight of yours |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
*chuckles* Thank you, morning Sunshine. I have to admit, I've thought about it but didn't think my poetry was good enough. Sunkissed. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Eloquently said, Inked Goddess. I like that! Thank you! Sunkissed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just awesome! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is truely wonderful! Eric |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Sunkissed.....this is going into my library. the poem is drenched with both light and dark. loved it! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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