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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-03-02 04:24 PM

Stepping Into Reality

We could be great together.
Lovers of the first degree.
I would kiss you all over you sexy body.
You could reciprocate me.
We could idolize one anothers charms.
Melt into each others arms.
Catch your breath and see if you agree.
Meanwhile I'll slip into something
more comfortable and step into reality.
That place in a world of real
where you probably don't even like me.

JamesLee
March02
2003

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

1 posted 2003-03-02 05:15 PM

Good irony. I really like this poem and I wish that more people would have read it. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-03-02 06:43 PM

"probably ..." real or unreal the chance is there!
Loved it.
Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-02 06:58 PM

Enjoyed this James...very true.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

4 posted 2003-03-02 09:33 PM

Nice reading... loved it

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-02 09:47 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh James, it is so very true, and I too wish that fantasy could be the real reality and never again would we have to be rudely awakened! (sad sigh) Here's hoping reality can have much of that fantasy glow of joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-03-04 09:07 PM

James, I really enjoyed this

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-03-05 04:35 AM

giggle...James, you have such tough luck...but you have such a sense of humor about it all...keep on trodding!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-03-06 12:51 PM

Now now, ease up on yourself...
she might.....just learn to love you more.

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

9 posted 2003-03-06 12:54 PM

liked this poem, these lines..

"Meanwhile I'll slip into something
more comfortable and step into reality"

say so much!
Thanks for letting us read this.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-03-07 09:43 PM

James - loved this - so true - what is seen and what is reality - excellent xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2003-03-07 10:25 PM

James - you write these well, I like the style of what you have to say...

BC

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

12 posted 2003-03-07 10:38 PM

I think it is excellent... love the way you begin it and then step off into reality.

And I know how you feel.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2003-03-07 11:24 PM

Hello James

I really loved this but I was sorry to read the sad ending.

Here is a little something for you :

"You cannot touch love......
but you can feel
the sweetness
that it pours
into everything."

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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