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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-01 11:32 PM

Embracing

I sat quietly by the window
as I heard the rumbling
a storm brewing on the horizon
a true fight of wills
the tempest was coming
and I stood ready
water sprayed windows with teardrops
and thunder fell in defiance
wanting a way of logic
but there is no reasoning in nature
it flows and burns at will
I raised the windows wide
wind swirled the room
leaving all in disarrangement
but I …am settled

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-03-02 08:02 AM

I think I can picture you. I can picture you quiet and peaceful.. no matter what.. head tucked to the paper you're righting.. embraced by thoughts.
I see you in what you write. I like that, thank you.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-03-02 08:41 AM

1slick_lady
Sometimes that's the best way, enjoyed.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-02 10:52 AM

I just love the way you let your words flow. It is perfect.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2003-03-02 03:03 PM

I love the taste of rain
Thomas

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-03-02 04:26 PM

Beautiful imagery.
Eric

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-03 12:44 PM

(sigh) Yes, leave the window open and let it all come around to you! (big hugggssssss) This is a powerful vision, sweet friend, I love the thunder of your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautirful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!