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Kiss No More
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Kiss No More |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
My lips are not virgin Nor are my thoughts pure I guess that's why to me, today, your lips I try to lure I cannot make eye contact My sight has dropped a little low Just the thought of your soft lips Makes me only want you to follow Your kiss is drugging I am an addict, I'm hooked Oh how you make my heart pound With just a little look Being with you has been heavenly Leaving you makes my heart sore But if I must have one last kiss Let me kiss you then kiss no more, |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
It's great when we find that special person and make that truly unique connection. Yet, it hurts us when they leave. You captured this perfectly in your poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Jacqueline, this is so very heartachingly beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry though I love it! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy you're back, sweet friend, yay, I send extra special friendship hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jacqueline, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is sad yet beautiful. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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