Open Poetry #25 |
She Belongs....for Janet Marie.... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
That distant expression she’s somewhere I can’t see tell me where’s she gone can you bring her back to me? Can you help me, I don’t know what to do no, she’s gone to a deeper shade of blue she’s found a new horizon her heart is traced in sand and foam her soul is forever changed, she’s found home there is nothing you can do it was simply meant to be let her go.... She belongs to the sea...... ~SEA~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How wonderful that the first poem in open 25 would be for Janet Marie. THis is beautifully written and I know will be much appreciated. Liz |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very heartfelt and beautifully written. Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful...and how JM loves the sea. Beautifully done Susan... ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...this is lovely. Eric |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im sooo happy you posted this one..now I can have it in me mothy library... thank you Susan..very much...seeing the ocean has changed the way I look at everything..it was the most amazing thing Ive ever felt...standing by the waves for the first time...walking in the tides barefoot...seeing the colors of the sunrise reflecting on the surf... THANK YOU to Mark for showing a moth the bluest of the blue thanks for sharing your words with me Sea-girlie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - precious is your write for Janet Marie... BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SEA, no better tribute could be paid to such a great lady than what you have written here in these picturesque words. Wonderful!! A truly happy person is one who |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, this is such a beautiful tribute to a beautiful and sweet Lady. Janet Marie is such a sweet and loving person, isn't she? I can tell from her poetry and her replies. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Ah, the sea...and a couple of ladies that appreciate it as much as I do. What can I say? Perfect! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
enjoyed that much i did.... A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful SEA, I think you should submit this for the book. Maree |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks all, I sent this to Janet first... it was for her, I'm glad she didn't mind me posting it here |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a beautiful offering to a friend... Sea you captured well the way sometimes we never look at life in the same way.. nicely done... |
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