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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It Was It was the whispers of thy touch, Of lips that pressed to mine. Words that flowed and kissed this heart, Binding me to thine. It was the touching, gentle eyes, Seeking, arresting mine. Mesmerizing windows, pooled Reflecting loving times. It was the softness, words of voice, Raising love in mine. I kiss the whispers from thy lips Spellbinding me to thine. It Is It is the tears that flow to cheek, Of dampness, moistened thought Concealing, holding nakedly, Such love of feelings fraught. It is the wants, desires too That tamper with mine sought Engaging use of silentness In web of thine 'tis caught. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Maureen Hi there it’s Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) I love the flow of this it’s absolutely perfect. Very well written the two sides of the coin, an excellent example of poetry in motion Well done very well done   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your emotions always speak with such sweetness and beauty! (kiss on cheek) May what it was of love forever be what it will be for you and fill you with happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
It was ... and still is, this magical weave of deep and truthful thought that keeps me at awe, each word I keep, and ache they have brought. Returned Hugs [{(M)}] *s |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It was the softness, words of voice, Raising love in mine. I kiss the whispers from thy lips Spellbinding me to thine. Very nice indeed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
It was, It is, can always be great write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I loved this gentle poetic before and after, Maureen.. It was the touching, gentle eyes, Seeking, arresting mine. Mesmerizing windows, pooled Reflecting loving times. Beautifully done...  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very gently said...filled with the essence of the passions that lie behind or between the words.. nice work! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very beautiful....... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It was the feeling of your work that drew me in. It is the depth of your feeling that brings me back everytime. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such beautiful gentle sadness fills these words...Your heart is tender and touches deeply all who read your poems....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) I see you take after your mom in some respects *s thank you for your visit..when I read you and your mom's reactions I feel it is you two in motion not my words *s Mr Eaton, I thank you *s Craig, your rhyming responses always touch me. hugs and xoxox for them and to you. Nightshade, thank You Cris and I love your signature "Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away." bernie, a sweet response, thank you *s Maureen [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-03-2002 08:25 PM).] |
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