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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-02-27 09:55 AM

You know the language
my soul speaks in silence
hear drums that soundlessly beat
the steps to my rain dance
You sing unwritten words to my tune
making the song complete
gently stroke my thoughts
listen to my chants
unobtrusive, discrete
You understand the darkness
the shadows of need
my pools of heat
simmering deep within my heart
You find me when lost
guide without deceit
you are gentle, kind
tender, sensual
romantic, so sweet
You are a thousand lifetimes
remembered without memory
mate of my soul, circle complete

~SEA~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2002-02-27 09:58 AM

It's a wonderful feeling, completeness - so glad to see you enjoying it. Beautiful write.

Michael

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-02-27 10:02 AM

complete...such a nice way to feel as I recall... very nicely done my friend.. very nice indeed.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-02-27 10:03 AM

SweetSEA~

It seems to be a morning for circling~
This is beautiful ... and you knew I'd love it~
Reaching - Touching - Feeling~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-02-27 10:04 AM

Sea,
Well done, ideal.

Tara Simms Hall
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since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

5 posted 2002-02-27 10:21 AM

Oh, this is amazing! I absolutely fell in love with the line "a thousand lifetimes shared..."

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-27 10:25 AM

WOW!!!This poem is absolutely stunning, SEA...I love the magic you have woven within your words drawing the circle with beauty and passion...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-27 11:05 AM

(smiles) WOW!!! I LOVE IT!!! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever be complete and pirouette with the beauty of true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2002-02-27 11:13 AM

This is wonderful, SEA.. The completion that a soulmate brings is indeed a precious part of life.. Nicely penned..

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2002-02-27 11:42 AM

You know the language
my soul speaks in silence
hear drums that soundlessly beat
the steps to my rain dance
You sing unwritten words to my tune
making the song complete
gently stroke my thoughts
listen to my chants
unobtrusive, discrete
You understand the darkness
the shadows of need
my pools of heat
===========================

well you know I love this one....poem and pic
and the subtle rhyme scheme too...
and the slow burn aint bad either

"Never made it as a wise man
couldn't cut it as a poor man stealin
Tired of livin like a blind man
sick of sight without a sense of feelin"

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

10 posted 2002-02-27 12:20 PM

It makes me happy to see you happy Susan!

Complete has to be the best feeling there is.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-02-27 12:24 PM

Finding that which makes us complete....what a lovely image...thank you....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

12 posted 2002-02-27 01:03 PM

Beautiful Sea.....love it and the picture is awesome....one of my favourites from the artist Lee Bogle.

((hugs))
Charisma

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2002-02-27 01:10 PM

SEA, oh this one is utterly lovely. Chris beautiful pic as well.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

14 posted 2002-02-27 01:20 PM

bump
oh yea i liked this very much.
glad you are so happy.
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2002-02-27 02:02 PM

what we do
to make the beginning
and end
the same
is our life journey

lovely view here SEA

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

16 posted 2002-02-27 07:06 PM

Oh my gosh sea, this is beautiful, I have some plates hanging similar to this picture, and I love the sentiments in your poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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