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Second Guessing |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
In voids That lie between Unsaid telling more Perhaps Of face than value Too easy to confuse Too little of literal Those spaces paused Reflectively Waiting for mirrored Self to see |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
hmmm..as long as you don't underestimate who you see..when you do. Well done C. Your expression is strong. Sincerely, Regina |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
some people are just gifted when it comes to this---heh heh. Enjoying your work so much. Welcome home! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Well done...it is often what goes unsaid that says the most...those pauses can speak volumes....I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Mirrored Self In the mirror, you softly touch I see your eyes upon me there I'm bound to you by ties, desires Your grasp, I'm in, for you I care. Out of the blue of darkness, I Arrest myself, upon your mind Wanting, needs I seed in you When you awake, this too, shall find. You'll think of me, each moment when I shall appear, leaving traces of The treasures opened, possessed am I Clinging to some hopeful love. Strangely though, the feelings rise A fated moment comes into view A maiden lost in steel of eyes The mirror traps me, wanting you. It soon gives way to lustful looks That indigo vastness of the night Controlling hands that soothe to touch Capturing this soul in pure delight. You own me now in darkness, eyes Lighting of embers to spark, in wait Echoes each, the sharing of sighs Reflecting wants and needs to sate. ~A~ inspired I always read between the lines..a fault of mine |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is sooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, between the lines there will always be more lines and those breaks in words we say can always tell and reveal so much sincere emotion! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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