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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Complexity I drown within complexity The infinite of small and all And no matter the starting be The journey’s an infinite call. There’s no subject matter I know With a beginning or an end There’s no matter that’s just so It is all subject to a bend. It’s relative to time and space A relative of conscious awe A pinpoint of a time and place That has no place and has no store. I am a victim of this pain In search of a vanities goal I am a victim near insane That resonates a magic soul. I’ve built a house to shelter me For I am truly out at sea. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so does that mean you live on a house boat? *s just teasing...your poems do have a style all their own, Sy. M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
M, Yes a lonely house boat. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Really? I would love that... well not the loneliness, I have enough of that here in a house I would love to move elsewhere. *smiles M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
M, Thank you  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll come visit you on your houseboat if you come visit me on mine...  Got your tickets yet?? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AhSeymour~ You are afloat on a poetic sea-of-thought~ I adore the simplicity of your Complexity~ Good morning sweet poet~  You make my day a little brighter~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am a victim of this pain In search of a vanities goal I am a victim near insane That resonates a magic soul. I've built a house to shelter me For I am truly out at sea. ================================= me thinks you need to sail to serentiy me Stinky-love... perhaps on a butterfly boat.   I do so enjoy the "complexities" of you mind and only you could write this line.. I am a victim near insane That resonates a magic soul. yes...you are magic "Never made it as a wise man |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lonely write done well...with some very strong lines.. Seymour..this I truly admire for the talent it took to put it together... as for lonely... many ways and places to be lonely my friend... and none of them pleasant. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Not yet but soon, Marge, Good morning to you sweet poet. JM, To my magic Capt Hair, Nice comment, thank you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it very...very much Sey, excellent as always!!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is sooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, there's so much in this world that is complex and I wish we could apply Occam's razor to everything and feel and act more freely! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And when the waves come to my bow I'll try to save my wits somehow by knowing that my all of me is safe in your eternity... [don't know why, but that's the thought you left behind....] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour hi there it’s Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) this is a wonderfully evocative piece of writing. The ache in it is oh so telling, but it’s beautiful too. I really like this, you are a good writer, why didn’t my mum point you out to me as someone with exceptional talent? Hey mum, are trying to keep the premier poets to yourself again? She’s like that you know, …… You are a very good writer Very well written, I’ll keep my eyes peeled for you.  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so simple in it's complexity...this is a wonderful poem that set me pondering...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know how I like these kinds. glad I clicked. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Thank you dear. Thank you Noah. Sunshine, Krissy, Sweet comment, thank you. Startime, Hugs back, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing Shadows, Thank you for the response. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the good ship Complexity waits again to set sail. . . and yet, I think that I'll wait. . . well done Sir. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, damm it isn’t there anywhere that pesky child hasn’t been? Oh well hopefully my words although late will be as sweet as hers, if not sweeter. This is one of your deep and meditative poems darling boy, as always you write with utter wonder, your pen is dipped into magic dust I think Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, damm it isn’t there anywhere that pesky child hasn’t been? Oh well hopefully my words although late will be as sweet as hers, if not sweeter. This is one of your deep and meditative poems darling boy, as always you write with utter wonder, your pen is dipped into magic dust I think Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A house at Sea...Maybe you live in a lighthouse, Sy... afterall, you are a shining beacon for all of us.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sven. Mushy, Lyra, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour a houseboat sounds so nice. I think I would love it. My niece and her husband did that for years, lived on one. Nice write. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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